Submission received! You will get feedback within 48 business hours! Keep an eye on your email! Catedonald@gmail.com MAIN QUESTIONS AND CONCERNS: Same doc as Article 1. This one is on pg 8. Use the tabs/TOC. See notes in doc. 3 main points: I really like the science behind all this, but is it too research based? How do I keep the pain point/problem and transformation focused on the course creator and not the learner. Take a look at the hook and CTA -- always sticky for me! Also, something to think about with these 2 and the next 3, how to connect them from one to the other. I think I'll go back at the end and add an intro outro that connects and outlines -- yesterday you ___, now you've ___ tomorrow we'll cover ____. (Just a thought I need to track.) **Now that this is written I can go watch your new training! LINK TO CONTENT: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Tpxs8vK0_--pwvpJmgwjy0S2UShjk1QofnvCUJ5An4M/edit?usp=sharing